
I have been a football fan since I was a kid, and right now I’m watching the College National Championship, thinking about risk, and writing a sonnet. I’ve always been a fan of the sonnet, although it doesn’t really seem to be in fashion these days. For those who don’t know, a sonnet generally has 14 lines, 10 syllables each line. There are three stanzas of four lines, and one of two lines. The stanzas of four lines have alternate rhyming and the last two lines also rhyme. The last two lines solve a problem or come to a conclusion. Below is my football sonnet, called Fourth and One.
FOURTH AND ONE–A FOOTBALL SONNET
The Bears and Rockets struggle on the field
Five minutes left, the star receiver’s out
The Rockets try to pass; the Bears won’t yield
It’s fourth and one; defenders range about
Should they punt or should they try to go?
The safest bet is punt and try again
To go for one’s a risk, as they all know
But safe won’t always win it in the end.
The Rockets walk determined to the line
Their jaws are set, their hands upon the ground
They lunge ahead; the measurement is fine
But in the end they garner four more downs.
The Rockets put six points up on the board
The greatest joy of risk is the reward.

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Amazing🥳
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Thanks. I just noticed if i view it on my phone, the line breaks are wrong, but on the laptop they are correct.
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Most welcome☺….Really😁
Have a nice day….
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Whodey 🏈🏈🥰
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I’m thinking about not watching so I don’t jinx them
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😂
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Well done!
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Thanks. I enjoyed it. Structured poetry like sonnets and tanka are like little puzzles. It’s fun to find the words and syllables to fit all together in the correct sequence and form.
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I’ve never attempted a sonnet.(Mainly because it just never occurred to me!)
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‘Bama wears red
Georgia does too
The game is all over
and now I am blue
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😦 You’re a good Bama fan. And you know they’ll be back.
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What a fun way to enjoy football. We watched the game last night, my husband and son are both Alabama fans, so there was disappointment in our house!
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Yes my husband is sad. But Bama will be back.
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